It had effort.
I realize that you put a lot of work into this, and I have seen worse, but it's pretty jerky, and there's only so excited you can get about a bunch of shapes.
I appreciate the relatively ambitious plot, but it still didn't live up to much. Also, work on your spelling & grammar.
Not a bad effort, keep trying.
I will keep trying, until the end, but you must understand that I'm a novice at flash.
Actually rather good.
Although the animation was simple, it was well done. Informative too, I guess.
The drawings were very good, and the animation was pretty good as well. A bit short and predictable, but still funny.
Thanx man ;D
A few tips
One - up the frame rate. It's choppy & clunky.
Two - Work on drawing skills - put a bit of time into the drawings, they look like they were done on Paint.
Three - Improve voices. There were no signs of emotion in any of the characters (although the Russian guy was pretty good). I have no idea what that 'song' and the start was.
Four - Story. I'm not saying it should be an epic, but at least try to make it make some sort of sense.
Five - Lip Sync. Making the mouths flap in a clearly repeated manner does not make the characters look like they're talking - it just looks weird.
Six - Put a 'play' button. To make it seem a little more professional & to stop it looping - you can download buttons/ preloaders from NG.
You get a little credit for showing signs of effort, but you have a lot to work on... but don't give up.
Krinkles, you have raised the bar again - the animation is just... amazing. This series just gets better & better.
Not too bad...
It had some ok drawings (you are able to draw perspective well) and the humor was pretty good, I liked the Futurama joke at least.
But it had no proper story, and was a bit too short.
But what got me the most is the massive amount of tweens, which were clearly detectable. It looks strange, and even sometimes morphed the drawing when it moved. There's nothing wrong with having the occasional tween, but they should only be used when they are doing somthing simple, or it is just silly not to use them. So next animation, do some frame-by-frame work, it'll look much bettter for it, even if it is harder.
But still, you have potential, so keep going!
Edd, you've done it again! The animation is really smooth, the script was laugh-out-loud funny and the acting was top class. I can't think of a single thing to improve on.
There is some stunning cinematography here, every single shot is creative. You really made me feel part of the action, which made it much more exciting. The acting was good, the artwork was excellent (loved how about 90% of it was black & white) and the music was well composed and well chosen. Great job, I fail to see any faults in this.
Amazing artwork, smooth animation, great action, nice choice of music. Lol I envy your skill. But seriously, nice job.
All creds to Aleksander Vinter for the music. Thanks
The humor was nice, if a little predictable and it gave the movie some charm, which is always good. I liked the choice of music, although sometimes it made the voices hard to hear, so you might want to turn it down a little bit. Of course a fairly low image quality is unavoidable if you want to keep the file a sane size, so you can't really be blamed for that. The acting was really rather good, it really 'sold' me the situation, if you see what I mean. As with 'Hay Wars' the speciaI effects were excellent. I felt the very opening 'from the makers of' credit went on for too long, but on the upside I really liked the menu design. Devolep the story a bit more, as this has lots of potential.
The part in the beginning that went too long was my fault, but not being too great at flash I didn't know how to fix it. I'll note the music next time.
Thanks for the great review man.
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